Constructive Criticism

There's been a delay on my wordplay

Mainly for me not having much to say

Or maybe I fear 

My words shall lie on deaf ears

Or upon Yes Men saying "YOU GO BOY SAY IT AGAIN!"

Dont sugarcoat ya opinion for Im a Sour Patch Kid

Well more like a WarHead for all my old heads

All that sweetness dont phase me

You want to touch me then taze me 

I mean shock me

That you will give me your honestly

That type where its the truth or ya mother whoopin you

That type where you on the podium reciting ya vows and you say "I do"

Or if you have any reason to stop matrimony n you wanna yell out "I DO!"

Well, do you? 

Want to give it to me straight?

Double shot tequila or honey jack?

Despite the way I might react

Cuz I wont take a sip, I'll throw it back

Maybe drink more of ya honestea

That you tell me.

Do they sell these in stores?

Aisle 3 or Aisle 4

I like what you serve Imma order another round

Intoxication via ya participation

Or caught flight lyrical elevation

But humility keeps me grounded

I'm that that deep

No Mr. Marcus strokin visions mentally 

So...you like this piece or nah?

Ting City

I saw some art where a queen covered her parts with flowers

So I asked this ting "If you a flower, what would you be?" She replied "Sour

Or Haze"

Reply put me in a daze

But then I remembered she's one with this herbal life

I dont mean that workout supplement life

Its that hippie chic but love her bundles life

That just cuz it aint natural, dont say I'm not woke life

Melanin Ice Tea served to quench my thirst

Cuz I swear I be sweatin her

My monotone humor somehow gettin her

I mean you know how that shit go

Booty Rub here. Pervlife there. Keep it 100 flow

She smokes my bluntness. Even the roaches

Inhales me like I'm that real shit

I just take her in pieces like she's an edible

Cuz eating it all up might be incredible

But that after affect might be too much

She spits fire when she talking about her passions

Her fashion

Her political views 

She might look like an Instahoney but dont get it confused

She got a couple degrees

Side hustle or two

Career pays the bills but her passion is where the colors blend

Or where the notes connect

Or where flashes begin

Been taken for a fuckboy ride or two so she know whats it about

But no need to beat around the bush if the lawn's snatched out

a Henny Goddess, Patron Princess, A Vodka Vixen

Pineapple Juice Papi here, you down for some mixin?

Sittin Pretty, Ting City, I need to travel

Your physical, mental, & spiritual I want to unravel. 

Millions of Ting Cities out there, I just need to roam

Check out the living conditions then call that city home 

#DanTaughtEm NSFW

Mahogany Goddess

Ever stop and wonder who will be at ya bedside?

When ya clock is a ticking til that laid to rest time?

Life has been slowing down, success got me talking honest 

Daydreams of once hooking up with my Mahogany goddess

God its...

These visions are so blurred

Beauty so differed she don't need to say a word

And that smile keeps me attentive til I see her curves

Respect them curves.

Please excuse my hands

Well pardon my eyes 

Body got these chicks yelling "GOALS" and thats all you! 

No weights no squats, no workouts? They like its not true

They think her got her waist snatched from they're point of view

But if they only knew

Cuz when I wrap my arm round her belly

Aint nothing that she could tell me

Hold close n whisper "I'll do ya body right if you let me"

Cuz I'm just a fan of a fan

She heard of my ways. I'll make her feel like a virgin again

How she hear about me? Friends of a friend

Lost my train of thought, back to where I began 

Bottom lips so soft, compressed by her lipgloss

One kiss would have me so lost

Somethin like a sweet bliss 

Explicit thoughts bleep this!

Like the french do, no double cheek shit

But I am just a freaknik

Yet she sees me as her strong prince

But my path leads to being a king

I'm so thorough and she is so modest

Got my eye on that Mahogany goddess

@DougieFMusic ft @Pitbull - On Purpose

Disclosure & @SamSmith "Hotline Bling" Cover Performance

Performed At Live Lounge On BBC Radio 1

#4EVERADEACON Back To School Club Mix

9:30 In East Orange

Sleepless nights leads to insomnia 

Eyes open like that light that keep the roaches from partying in the kitchen like its Saturday night fever

I'm eager to get rest

But this weight upon my chest

These barbells lie on my heart

But I don't know where to start

Man these bills are stacking high

Collectors out suckin me dry

And all I wanna do is cry 

Cuz shit prevents me from being fly

Or that guy

Fridge on the corner askin for donations 

Kicks got holes in em. Gettin paid for penetration 

Stomach on bum status. Feet on that hoe shit

I need a blessing Lord. A getaway from all of it

Family hurtin. Family strugglin. Yet I'm stuck north 

If anybody got a way out, please come forth!

Feeling I wasted my time with the wrong folks

Cuz these days they out laughin with some new folks

Did I miss what's funny? Oh I must me the new joke

They out here moving on up. I'm here like Mr. Slowpoke

So I'm here sluggin

Not here thuggin

Water chuggin

Cuz this the only thing wet that I'm lovin

Thought it was all mutal, guess it wasn't 

Maybe I'm just buggin, blind yet looking for somethin

Cuz I'm tryna get my life in order

So it could lead to tatting up the names of my daughters

But those are future goals 

Don't know what the future holds 

Read my fate once it unfolds

I swear I got shit heatin up, just fetch me a match n some coals

Pissin up some lighter fluid 

Yes only I could do it

Vents over. Let all of the out

Now back to what yall care about 

@BennieBates ft J Eliaye - Hotline Bling

Elliot Trent @ElliotTrent - Crescendo (MIXTAPE)